Friday, November 2, 2007

Slab walk part 2

Drawn with a Wacom tablet in Flash, the word's friendliest animation program!


JohnK said...

it's much better

the squash in the bounce is great

the arms are a bit too stiff though-they should bend a bit more in the back key positions

and straighten (not completely) in the down positions-in the middle of the steps

as each arm comes forward- accent the up position slightly (like he's punching the air)

the hand in front seems to jerk in the front position now

his leg shouldn't taper towards the bottom

amir avni said...

Thanks John, I'll get on it!